Friday, May 8, 2009
My First Poem ♥
Miss Lee "forced" us to submit those novel, essay or poem which composed by ourselves for Perak chinese writing competition.
But there is just a very very and extremely little bounty,
so stingy huh.
I always do my work at last minute,
I decided to compose a poem,
Wei Jia same group with me,
she helped me a lot.
I can't believe that our poem had been chosen to take part in the competition,
because our last minute working was appreciated,
but need to "sacrifice" either Jia or me,
and only a person could be chosen.
Jia is really kind enough to give me the chance,
she told teacher I formed the idea.
thankxxx, my dearest Jia.
Miss Lee said that has some great feeling in our poem,
but she almost changed the whole poem to more standard,
no more original flavor, hahaz.
Our poem is indeed suit the recent issue, H1N1.
Have this idea in sudden, with no reason.
Original poem here,
kinda exaggerate and weird huh, hahaz,
but I like it!
Hope I could win a glory for me and my school,
although it's kinda hard to win.
It's ok, I tried my best what.